We all like to have our say and express our opinions on many different things. This past couple of weeks you have had the opportunity to do so through the task of persuasive writing. Through this work, you have been exposed to many differing topics such as school uniform, animal testing, abortion and closure of zoos. As I value your opinion, I would like you to comment on your chosen topic and express in a paragraph your opinion of this topic (just as you have done in your persuasive essay). Make sure you include why you are passionate of this topic.
July 23rd, 2008 at 12:30 pm
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25 Responses to “9B What’s my opinion?”
hey miss T i did my topic on should animal testing be illegal and i chose that topic because ive heard all the arguments on the news about all the animals being tested and i thought it would be a good idea if i wrote about it was kinda hard to write about because i had no idea what to write about but in the end i got my thoughts down and wrote my 2 drafts. thanks for reading

July 24, 2008 @ 2:37 pmHi Miss T
July 24, 2008 @ 2:37 pmi did my essay on animal testing and i’m against it because it’s mean, unfair and bad to the animals because they put pain to te animals and read my essay to find out more.
bye for now
i chose it cas it was easy i chose oz is a racsit nation
July 24, 2008 @ 2:38 pmif i had a child than i would feel obligated to keep it and live a happy life. i think that a life is precious and if i could not fall pregnant i would be angry at people who are just. it is wrong to just choose a lifes future. what if that baby was important? i would feel bad about killing that infant. i am sick to my stomach with the thought.
July 24, 2008 @ 2:40 pmhello miss T
This previous persuasive writing task we have just done was ok i guess it was kind of hard for the first draft to like think of the reasons all the stuff the first lesson we had on this essay i got distracted and i didnt get much done so thats why i had detention and yeah but in the end i finally finished so thats the good thing so the lesson is people is to never get distracted unless its really funny and you have to ok bye now
July 24, 2008 @ 2:42 pmhello my homie miss t
these past few weeks i have been writing about how i am towards animal testing being illegal.
July 24, 2008 @ 2:42 pmthe reason i chose this topic was not because i am one of those animal huggers but like i just think its wrong like how people can treat animals like that and its sick to me and i honestly think they should find another alternative to do their testing and not on animals because they should have the same rights as us and we shouldnt be able to do that to them just becaus they cant speak like us. Animals have their own personalitys, strengths and weaknesses just like us
G’day mate. I think I did a fair job on my essay. I didn’t have much to complete it but I personally think I did ok. Knowing I can write a argument properly makes me feel good. LOL.z
umm I don’t know what to write about because ny head is spinning in circles. But I could have chosen a better topic but I didn’t have much time to work on it. Well ye I rock. xo ciao
July 24, 2008 @ 2:46 pmhey miss,
jokes.
hahahaha
July 24, 2008 @ 2:47 pmi see you from the pod
Uhmm my argumentive essay that i wrote was about abortion. i think it was a good topic for me to choose. In my essay i agree with having abortions because i think women in this world have different reasons to go through it. But then again i dont think its a good thing either. it is a cruel thing to do, to kill a person. I think i did pretty well in my essay. It was pretty challenging for me but i think i just got there. so yeah, well im going to leave it here.
BYE MISS T, i mean miracle maker
hello T-PAIN!
i’ve have been writing about
“should school uniform be compulsory” this past week
while i was doing this topic i thought really hard about it and i wrote about how school uniform affects, school
and students behavior i took a while to do cause it was a hard topic to do but i chose that school uniform should be compulsory.
if you read this you have to pay me $50
July 24, 2008 @ 2:48 pmmy assiment was about racisim in australia i think that australia is racsist but only a little bit
the assiment was hard realy hard
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July 24, 2008 @ 2:50 pmhaaaaaaiiiiiii
July 24, 2008 @ 2:52 pmI did my essay on abortion, and I was for it.
Because although I find it immoral, and wrong to kill a human being, I can also see many reasons, and situations where abortion could/would be the best way to go.
Yesssm:)
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July 24, 2008 @ 2:54 pmLOL @ TOM’S COMMENT.
+ TINA IS COOL
hi miracle maker (:
July 24, 2008 @ 2:55 pmhey miss its me again this comment is cause my previous one was not right i forgot to put in my topic and yeah totally off target so any ways my topic was should school uniform be comulsory? and i chose that it should and yeah that the thingy i forgot to tell you in the other comment i made so yeah cya miss :):)
July 24, 2008 @ 3:00 pmhey turtle,
July 24, 2008 @ 3:01 pmyeah you no my assignment was easy cause it was on school uniform.
heyhey miss
July 24, 2008 @ 3:01 pmi did my essay on the abortion. i think is was a good topic for me to choose because i never really have understood how they did it.
now knowing how they do it and some reasons why people do it has made me realize and take more notice of this.
this topic was alright. i didnt really enjoy it but i did learn alot from it.
*abortion being an inhumane act*
I think that abortion is good in some cases i know that people say and believe that having abortion is like killing an innocent human and i do think abortion is an inhumane act but there are people out there who appriciate that abortion is available as an option like women and teenage girls who have had to choose between their own lives or still birth. And what if a women was forced to carry an unwanted pregnancy obviously the result would come out as an “unwanted child”. Usually children born unwanted are unloved, un-cared for, and are left to suffer.i think that people should just lay back and let those who choose to have abortion have it for they have there own reasons. The reason i choose this subject was because i found it quite interesting.
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July 24, 2008 @ 3:03 pmover and out!lolZ
yea my comment i dont get it?
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July 24, 2008 @ 7:25 pmmy topic is should school uniform be compulsory?
July 25, 2008 @ 11:21 ami wrote that school uniform should be compulsory in my persuavise text but i really belive that uniform should not be compulsory and we should be able to wear free dress every day!!!!!!!!!! (yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah)
HI MISSSS!
im up to like list 70 i think :’( don’t get mad miss, cause i’ll cry if you do. ROFLMAO! 

omg how nice are my biscuits yeah!? hahaha.
well just here to tell you that im behind in practical words
oh and have you done any miracle making so far? changed someones life or anything like that? you could start by correcting my essay yeah? HAHA nah only kidding miss. it’s good that you havent corrected it yet, cause i have alot of other homework/assignments to do so yeah. LOL
I’m going to leave it here, cause im going to take up the whole page if i keep typing
kbye. LOVE YOU HEAPS MISS (:
Question: what do you call postman pat when he retires?
July 25, 2008 @ 11:23 amAnswer: Pat. LOLLL ASHDAQHDAGYCBEFR HAHAHAHHA coolest joke ever =P
Hello miss
I did my essay on animal cruelty. I chose this topic because ive heard alot about animal cruelty on the news. I have been thinking really hard about this and i think its just not right. Its really harsh and sad just treating animlas like this. the reason why i chose this because i think this topic is really interesting to me and you could learn alot of stuff about animals while u search.
hehehe cool
anywayz bye miss t
July 25, 2008 @ 11:24 amhey miss ;P
i did my agumment on should zoo’s should be closed.
i choosed to go against for zoos being close because zoo’s look after all the animals, it is a nice place to visit, and it was a easy topic =)
read luke comment its good as =]
July 25, 2008 @ 11:25 am:D:):(:P
hi miss
umm…
..i kinda havnt started it…i think
July 25, 2008 @ 11:26 amHI MISS! i am bored.. whats with your classes these days? getting abit boring! ROFL nah only kidding. i think we should have a double period of free time soon cause yeah
we are cool. LOL well see you later.
bye bye bye
tina is awesome (:
August 6, 2008 @ 10:21 ami think the persuasive task was good. i got to learn somethings on animal testing which was intresting
next time can we do pursyuasive writing in the form of adds
August 15, 2008 @ 11:41 am